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Example Thesis Statement: Research Paper
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Example Thesis Statement: Research Paper
Research paper topic: How to write an academic paper (description)
| Thesis Statement | Stronger Thesis Statement |
|---|---|
| There are many things a writer needs to know to write a good university paper. This paper will discuss the writing process and research tips as being key to producing a good essay. | An academic paper requires organization, adequate research or attention to subject matter, and expression in conventional English; however, without the author’s deep understanding of the topic, the essay falls flat. |
The first example tells what the paper will be about in general terms; we know that the writer will discuss the writing process and research tips. However, the word choice is weak. The use of specific words would better set a tone and focus the essay.
The second, stronger example specifically states the requirements for writing a paper, and attaches importance to one particular requirement, thus focusing the reader on what the author feels is essential.
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